REVIEW #86: City of a Thousand Dolls (Bhinian Empire #1) by Miriam Forster

Title: City of a Thousand Dolls
Series: Bhinian Empire #1
Author: Miriam Forster
Publisher: Harper Teen
Release Date: February 5, 2013
Pages: 361, Hardcover

Nisha was abandoned at the gates of the City of a Thousand Dolls when she was just a child. Now sixteen, she lives on the grounds of the isolated estate, where orphan girls apprentice as musicians, healers, courtesans, and, if the rumors are true, assassins. Nisha makes her way as Matron’s assistant, her closest companions the mysterious cats that trail her shadow. Only when she begins a forbidden flirtation with the city’s handsome young courier does she let herself imagine a life outside the walls. Until one by one, girls around her start to die.

Before she becomes the next victim, Nisha decides to uncover the secrets that surround the girls’ deaths. But by getting involved, Nisha jeopardizes not only her own future in the City of a Thousand Dolls—but her own life.

 

"This is what the Lotus Throne decrees:

First: No girl in the City of a Thousand Dolls shall be judged by her birth. Upon entering the City, each girl will be considered casteless until she is spoken for, at which time she will receive the appropriate caste mark and be given a place in the Bhinian Empire. 

Second: Let all who would claim a girl pay an agreed on price to compensate the City for her training. No girl shall be spoken for without the formal exchange of coin. 

Third: If a man pays in advance, the girl shall be trained as he specifies. If he comes to claim her and finds her unsatisfactory, he may demand the return of his money or ask to be given another girl instead. 

Fourth: Once a year, the City shall host a great Redeeming Ceremony. The girls shall display their training and beauty so that all who come may honor the wisdom of the Lotus Throne in creating and maintaining such a city. At that time, any who seek a wife or apprentice may choose from the available girls.

Fifth: If a man wishes to claim a girl before she reaches her sixteenth year, he must appear before the City Council and petition for her early release. The Council may refuse or grant such a request as it wishes. 

Sixth: No girl shall be from the City before the time of her first blood.

Seventh: Once a girl has been spoken for, she is the responsibility of the one who speaks for her. She may not be returned to the City, nor is the City responsible for her future conduct. 

From a scroll written and sealed by the Second Lotus Emperor, establishing the rules of the Redeeming."

The City of a Thousand Dolls is a sanctuary for unwanted girls and a necessity after a two-child law is passed in the Bhinian Empire. Once in the City, each girl becomes a member of a House - Flowers, Combat, Beauty, Jade, Pleasure, Shadows, or Music - and is trained in the art of that House. When she comes of age she is presented at the Redeeming, at which time suitors bid on that girl for purchase. She then enters society as a proper citizen of the Bhinian Empire. Although exceptions exist, the Redeeming is not a ceremony to be feared, but rather, one of great anticipation.

Nisha was orphaned at a late age and, upon her arrival at the City, was deemed too old to train. As a result, Nisha doesn’t belong to any house, but instead is the assistant to the Matron of the City. In the role she has the freedom of moving among houses but her future is not secure. Caught up in a political battle for power, Nisha finds herself in a position to be sold as a bond slave. To buy her time, she begins to investigate a series of murders that have recently plagued the City. 

I honestly don't have much to say about this book, which probably says everything. I thought the best thing about this book was the world-building. If I could describe the setting in one word, that word would be rich. This asian inspired setting was very unusual and extraordinary and I really had a picture of something beautiful in my head while reading. But the rest of the book was just average. 

The murder mystery was a bit cliche but I still had fun with it. But the romance was weak if not discouraging altogether. The book would have been better without it or needed a different conclusion. He basically just gave up on her and she accepted that life with him wouldn't have been for her. Ehh, alright? I would say the story in general was a bit simplistic and young.

But again, that's not to say that I disliked the book there just isn't much that stands out except the world and that's not enough. And I don't really see where the book will go from here. I can't justify a higher rating. 

"There were so many new pieces to her identity, sometimes she didn't even recognize herself. Half Kildi and half Sune, orphaned and adopted, wounded and free. The only thing she knew for certain was that she was loved. And for now that was enough."

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REVIEW #85: Everbound (Everneath #2) by Brodi Ashton

Title: Everbound
Series: Everneath #2
Author: Brodi Ashton
Publisher: Balzer & Bray
Release Date: January 22, 2013
Pages: 358, Hardcover

Nikki Beckett could only watch as her boyfriend, Jack, sacrificed himself to save her, taking her place in the Tunnels of the Everneath for eternity — a debt that should’ve been hers. She’s living a borrowed life, and she doesn’t know what to do with the guilt. And every night Jack appears in her dreams, lost and confused and wasting away.

Desperate for answers, Nikki turns to Cole, the immortal bad boy who wants to make her his queen — and the one person least likely to help. But his heart has been touched by everything about Nikki, and he agrees to assist her in the only way he can: by taking her to the Everneath himself.

Nikki and Cole descend into the Everneath, only to discover that their journey will be more difficult than they’d anticipated — and more deadly. But Nikki vows to stop at nothing to save Jack — even if it means making an incredible sacrifice of her own.

 

Everbound far exceeded my expectations! I liked Everneath well enough but it didn't resonate with me like it did with many others. So I went into Everbound expecting the same outcome but let me tell you, it BLEW ME AWAY. No middle book syndrome here folks.

Nikki is desperate to save Jack from the Everneath. She can tell she is running out of time because he is fading from her dreams..fast. After a foolish jump to the Everneath alone, she realizes that she will need Cole's help if she wants any chance of finding Jack and making it back out alive. After much begging and pleading on Nikki's part, Cole agrees to accompany her and they set off through the Everneath in search of the tunnels and Jack.

I have to admit that I was expecting 300 pages of Nikki wallowing in her guilt and sorrow, so I cannot be more happy to tell you that all pity parties and emotional releases were well incorporated and complemented rather than overshadowed the plot. This book was all about adventure and danger and steadfast determination and love. I. ate. it. up. So so so well done!

Brodi Ashton's depiction of the Everneath was incredible. Man oh man, she did some serious work here! It was so imaginative and thoughtful and PERFECT for the story - really set the stage for this wonderful book. Most of the journey takes place in a maze consisting of three rings: Water, Wind, and Fire. The Ring of Water brings out your despair. The Ring of Wind plays tricks on the mind. And The Ring of Fire consumes you in doubt. There is also the treat of Wanderers - starving Everlivings or rather "zombies with brains". To find Jack, Nikki must summon a tether to him, which she creates through happy memories. This is where Ashton incorporates the flashbacks of Nikki and Jack and it was a significant improvement over Everneath.

HOLY SMOKES THAT ENDING GUYS!!! I am not often let completely baffled at the end of a book. I so did not see what was coming and it was literally and ending to beat all other endings. Talk about plot twists - I had to sit down for this one (figuratively, of course - I don't read standing up). And Cole - you BASTARD!

In summary, if you loved Everneath, you should definitely read this book (duh). But if you were like me and had some reservations, you should still read this book. Ashton totally hit it out of the park with this one and if this book is any indication of what is to come in Evertrue, fans are in for quite a treat. 

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REVIEW #84: Requiem (Delirium #3) by Lauren Oliver

Title: Requiem
Series: Delirium #3
Author: Lauren Oliver
Publisher: HarperCollins Children's Books
Release Date: March 5th 2013
Pages: Hardcover, 391 pages
Source: Audiobook from Library, Purchased Hardback

Summary from Goodreads:
They have tried to squeeze us out, to stamp us into the past.

But we are still here.

And there are more of us every day.

Now an active member of the resistance, Lena has been transformed. The nascent rebellion that was under way in Pandemonium has ignited into an all-out revolution in Requiem, and Lena is at the center of the fight.

After rescuing Julian from a death sentence, Lena and her friends fled to the Wilds. But the Wilds are no longer a safe haven—pockets of rebellion have opened throughout the country, and the government cannot deny the existence of Invalids. Regulators now infiltrate the borderlands to stamp out the rebels, and as Lena navigates the increasingly dangerous terrain, her best friend, Hana, lives a safe, loveless life in Portland as the fiancée of the young mayor.

Maybe we are driven crazy by our feelings.

Maybe love is a disease, and we would be better off without it.

But we have chosen a different road.

And in the end, that is the point of escaping the cure: We are free to choose.

We are even free to choose the wrong thing.

Requiem is told from both Lena’s and Hana’s points of view. The two girls live side by side in a world that divides them until, at last, their stories converge.

  


I was so excited to start Requiem, I really enjoyed the first two books. After the ending of the second I just NEEDED to know what was going to happen. I have been avoiding all reviews and discussion about Requiem so I could go in with a fresh view without any preconceived notions.

The story is told from both Hana and Lena’s point-of-view. It starts with Lena still in the wilds while Hana is preparing to be married to Fred, soon to be mayor. I really enjoyed Hana’s chapters even more than I enjoyed reading about Lena. So I will break up my thoughts by POV

Lena: We were left with a huge bomb being dropped on Lena, Alex is still alive. I was expecting a whole range of drama to come with this but instead got something less exciting. Alex basically said I never loved you and Lena had to deal with the fact she would never love Julian as much as she loved Alex. Really Alex… you never loved her… I just don’t believe you… I thought Lena’s reconnection with her mother was nice (yep… just nice), nothing terribly special. Lena’s parts of the story while having lots of fighting and planning scenes were just mediocre for me, not bad but not great.

Hana: Every chapter I read with Hana made me like her more and more. She surprised me constantly; even though she is ‘cured’ she is a strong person that still has a moral compass and feelings. The way she silently and secretly fights against Fred is awesome. Fred is just a Grade A JERK and she gets him back for it. She even owns up and apologizes to Lena which ends up saving her life. Which I think shows her true character (**I did a happy dance when they did their handshake**) She is one of the main reasons I still enjoyed Requiem.
Now to the ending. Man was I disappointed. I am not saying this was a bad book in any way; I just can’t get over the ending. It was like if you were driving along and BOOOOM!! The road ends, that’s it, no more, the end, hope you enjoyed. It was just so abrupt. I was left wanting more. Also, can someone explain what happened to Julian, I reread the last 3 chapters, and he just kind of fizzled away.

Overall, Requiem was 3.5 stars, I cannot give it anymore stars because the lack of ending just left me so disappointed. I just wanted more resolution, more than just a hint of a happy ending. It just seems like there should be another book. The story as a whole was enjoyable but not lacked the fireworks and magic I was looking for. 





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I'm Waiting On Siege and Storm (The Grisha #2) by Leigh Bardugo

“Waiting On” Wednesday is a weekly event hosted by Breaking the Spine to shine a spotlight on upcoming releases that we’re eagerly anticipating!

This week I chose...


Title: Siege and Storm
Author: Leigh Bardugo
Release Date: June 4, 2013

Summary from Goodreads:
Darkness never dies.

Hunted across the True Sea, haunted by the lives she took on the Fold, Alina must try to make a life with Mal in an unfamiliar land, all while keeping her identity as the Sun Summoner a secret. But she can’t outrun her past or her destiny for long.

The Darkling has emerged from the Shadow Fold with a terrifying new power and a dangerous plan that will test the very boundaries of the natural world. With the help of a notorious privateer, Alina returns to the country she abandoned, determined to fight the forces gathering against Ravka. But as her power grows, Alina slips deeper into the Darkling’s game of forbidden magic, and farther away from Mal. Somehow, she will have to choose between her country, her power, and the love she always thought would guide her–or risk losing everything to the oncoming storm.

I think we can all agree that Shadow and Bone was awesome and Leigh Bardugo has some mad talent. And preliminary reviews of this book prove that Siege and Storm will be just as fantastic, if not better. Not to mention this cover is beautiful! For these reasons and more, this baby is pre-ordered and I am eagerly awaiting for June 4th to come around! 

What are you waiting on?


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REVIEW #83: Eleanor & Park by Rainbow Rowell

Title: Eleanor & Park
Author: Rainbow Rowell
Publisher: St. Martin's Press
Release Date: February 26th 2013
Pages: Hardcover, 325 pages
Source: Audiobook from the Library

Summary from Goodreads:
"Bono met his wife in high school," Park says.
"So did Jerry Lee Lewis," Eleanor answers.
"I’m not kidding," he says.
"You should be," she says, "we’re sixteen."
"What about Romeo and Juliet?"
"Shallow, confused, then dead."
''I love you," Park says.
"Wherefore art thou," Eleanor answers.
"I’m not kidding," he says.
"You should be."

Set over the course of one school year in 1986, ELEANOR AND PARK is the story of two star-crossed misfits – smart enough to know that first love almost never lasts, but brave and desperate enough to try. When Eleanor meets Park, you’ll remember your own first love – and just how hard it pulled you under.


AHHH so many thoughts about this one it’s hard to put into words. Eleanor & Park is a simple yet powerful story about two opposites that change each other’s life. Park has been living in his same house his whole life, his mother is Korean and his father is American. He comes from a happy home with two loving parents and while he is not the coolest kid at school, he still gets by pretty unscathed. Eleanor on the other hand is a bit overweight, has bright red unruly hair and pretty much follows her on rules when it comes to fashion. Eleanor shares a room with her many siblings while her mother gets yelled at and tossed around by her drunken step-father. By fate, Eleanor ends up having to sit next to park on the bus to school one day and that is how their friendship unfolds.

I loved this story from the plot pacing to the character development, to the writing style; everything was so beautifully real. The narration switches between Eleanor and Park allowing a deeper look into their individual lives as well as their thoughts. The writing style was so different from what I usually read, with short sentences, dialogue, thoughts, and blend of just everything.

The story flowed perfectly with the romance and love building gradually. I was left wanting so much more of Eleanor and Park. They are probably the most memorable characters I have read. I was thinking about their story all day long, just wanting to get back to listening to the audio book. The audio was fantastic, there are two narrators (one for Park and one for Eleanor) that read accordingly; the audio just enhanced the greatness of the story.

GAHH, the ending though… I wanted something else but was still quite okay with it. It is the only reason I just couldn’t give it 5 stars, I want more closure!! It left me thinking about the story long after finishing. Even though Eleanor and Park are so different, they are so perfect, so real.
I absolutely 100% recommend Eleanor & Park even if you do not usually read contemporary books (I don’t and I LOVED it). Rainbow Rowell’s writing draws you into the lives of Eleanor and Park and pulls you deeper and deeper into their struggles and against-all-odds relationship.


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Top Ten Tuesday (15) - April 23rd


                           


Top Ten Tuesday is a weekly meme hosted by The Broke and the Bookish. This week's Top Ten list is "Top Ten Books I Thought I'd Like MORE/LESS Than I Did"



More - Dualed (Dualed #1) by Elsie Chapman
I was pretty disappointed in Dualed. Disappointed in the main character, the world building, the action. I thought I'd be able to overlook some of the flaws other readers struggled with but they were too big to ignore.

Less - Slated  (Slated #1) by Teri Terry
I was never anticipated how much I would like Slated. It's not a high action book but it's full of such raw emotion and steady undertone of anticipation. I was surprised by how much this book made me feel.

More - Then You Were Gone by Lauren Strasnick
I think this might have been the first contemporary book I've read that I straight up didn't like.  I was really turned off by the behavior of the main character and I thought there were a lot of poor messages. The only reason I finished it was because it was such a short book and I really hate not finishing books.

Less - Marking Time (The Immortal Descendants #1) by April White
I thought I'd like this book when I picked it up but I was still pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed it. It definitely exceeded my expectations and the time travel aspect was really well done.

More - Level 2 (The Memory Chronicles #1) by Lenore Appelhans
I had a lot of problems with the world-building in Level 2. The entire setting felt contradictory and immature and it ruined my entire reading experience. 

More: Code Name Verity by Elizabeth Wein
I knew this one was a stretch for me but I read so many awesome review about it.  It was not a bad book by any means, it just was not for me.

Less: Mind Games by Kiersten White
While I thought Paranormalcy wasn't bad it was not one of my favorite reads so I was hesitant  about Mind Games.  But I was immediately drawn into the assassin life and powers of the two sisters.

Less: The Ruining by Anna Collomore
Contemporary Thrillers are not typically my thing either but Nicole won this from Goodreads so I figured I would try it out.  I LOVED it, the whole creepiness and realness of it was great.

More: The Madness Underneath by Maureen Johnson
I really enjoyed The Name of The Star.  I thought the London setting, the jack the ripper aspects and the Shades of London were awesome but the sequel did not live up to it.  The plot just seemed to fall flat with lots of predictability. 

More: Across the Universe by Beth Revis
I am a sucker for Dystopians and one that are set in space, I was like YES please.  But I was not a huge fan of the protagonist, she was just way too whiny.  Some of the parts of the plot seemed unnecessary as well.



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REVIEW #82: Shadowlands (Shadowlands #1) by Kate Brian

Title: Shadowlands
Series: Shadowlands #1
Author: Kate Brian
Publisher: Hyperion
Release Date: January 8, 2013
Pages: 336, Hardcover

Rory Miller had one chance to fight back and she took it. Rory survived… and the serial killer who attacked her escaped. Now that the infamous Steven Nell is on the loose, Rory must enter the witness protection with her father and sister, Darcy, leaving their friends and family without so much as a goodbye.

Starting over in a new town with only each other is unimaginable for Rory and Darcy. They were inseparable as children, but now they can barely stand each other. As the sisters settle in to Juniper Landing, a picturesque vacation island, it seems like their new home may be just the fresh start they need. They fall in with a group of beautiful, carefree teens and spend their days surfing, partying on the beach, and hiking into endless sunsets. But just as they’re starting to feel safe again, one of their new friends goes missing. Is it a coincidence? Or is the nightmare beginning all over again?

 
WHAT. THE. HECK. Shadowlands was the perfect combination of creepy and suspenseful up until the moment the storyline suddenly derailed and then crashed and burned.. Seriously I don’t think I could be more disappointed in the progression of the story after what was such an amazing start. I feel like I jumped into some alternate reality and got the wrong ending to the book.

Rory Miller barely escapes death at the hands of a notorious serial killer, only for him to evade capture and continue to hunt for her. Placed in Witness Protection, her and her family are sent to the isolated and unsettling <>. The feeling of safety is only temporary because soon there are signs of him everywhere - his favorite tune, his cackling laugh, his jacket and messenger bag. Rory doesn’t know if she’s being paranoid or if he’s found her already. But other weird stuff is happening on the island that she also can’t make sense of, causing her to doubt herself.

This is where the book went wrong for me. The story would have been enough if it was just about the cat and mouse game the two of them were playing - him catching up to her, taunting her, preying on her fear. It was chilling but engrossing in and of itself. But there was a secondary theme that started building about half way through the book involving the mysterious island and its secrets. There was an odd dynamic among the locals and they all seemed to watch Rory intently, further unsettling her. Then visitors start disappearing, people her sister can’t seem to remember, and their possessions start to pop up in odd places and with the wrong people - a guitar strap here a hat there. It’s all very odd. But when she tries asking questions, the answers she gets, if any, don’t seem to tell the whole story.

And then the plots converge, some weird stuff happens which isn’t really explained, and then there is a big SURPRISE, which just left me gaping at the last page. I shuffle back and forth through the pages not knowing what else to do before finally accepted defeat and finishing with a big WHAT JUST HAPPENED?

But it’s not just the plot that caused my frustration. My frustration for Rory and her family grew the more and more I read. If a serial killer evaded the cops for 10 years, killed 14 other girls, and won’t stop until he’s finished you off - in my book that makes it ok to be “better safe than sorry”. Don’t chalk up all these weird occurrences to coincidence. Don’t brush everything off as paranoia. Do you want to end up dead? I don’t like when characters talk themselves out of being reasonable, especially in a life or death situation.

So even though I’ve ranted about how annoyed I am with the ending and how I feel like the author couldn’t settle on a plot she liked better and decided “hey I’ll just mash both together” I am genuinely curious about what happens next. It was one of those endings that totally messes with your mind but you need to know more, you need to make sense of it or you won’t be able to let it go. Maybe that was her evil plan all along, leave readers so discombobulated that they have to pick up the next book or they will forever be in a state of dumbfoundedness. If that’s the case, it worked you master manipulator.

***PLEASE DO NOT CONTINUE IF YOU HAVEN’T READ THE BOOK. MAJOR SPOLIERS***

OK will someone please explain to me that ending? Is anyone else upset/confused/feeling gipped because of it? I know all the locals are dead but is Rory and her family dead too? Is Mr. Nell dead? Is this one of those Sixth Sense endings where Rory had died a while ago and didn’t realize it? Or is it just the locals and some visitors? And did the visitors die of natural causes/was it their time? Or are the locals killing them? What are with these powers? Krista has some kind of memory erasing power I guess. But what it doesn’t work on Rory? Was it magic that incapacitated Mr. Nell when he was attacking Rory? WHAT AM I MISSING? MAKE THE CONFUSION STOP.


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